I'm in the tshirt making business again

I recently informed the Utah Freeskier Society, a club that gets college kids discount season passes, that their shirt for this year sucks. Not wanting to be a negative nancy that only tears people down, I decided to come up with my own version of what the shirt should look like. Cross your fingers for me guys, I hope it gets approved and hundreds of kids will be walking around my campus wearing my design.

Their Design:



My Design: